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Didn't turn out as well as hoped- Critique's would be really appreciated!
First time using pencil in ages, so frustrating;;

I was thinking a rabbit version of a selkie - she takes off the mask, like the seal takes off it's skin.. or maybe it's Alice.

Loses some detail when it's rotated like this, but I think it makes it easier to concentrate on the faces?

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~thIrdIII3WoRLd Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oHH MY GOODNEss...THIs is GORGEOUS..."III3"
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:iconlisa-of-the-moon:
*Lisa-Of-The-Moon Aug 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your amazing work was Featured! [link]
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:iconreluin:
Wow I'm flattered ;v; Thank you!
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:iconarigato-lion:
cool great look and feel
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:iconwildweasel339:
*Wildweasel339 Mar 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I didn't notice the mask until after reading your description. It gets a little bit lost among the hair, because it's relatively the same value. Perhaps her hair could fall into darker shadow in that area, adding more contrast.

I agree with the below comment about adding shadow under her chin. That would help break up the shape of her head, giving it more volume (roundness).
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:iconreluin:
I really appreciate the help! I see what you mean, I'll try to work those things out.
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~JustCh-L-C Feb 28, 2012  Student Artist
This is incredible! I love how dark it is and yet it's so powerful! I'd like to see a little more shading in certain areas (like under the neck) but it's not too to bad! :) I'd also be careful about making the scenery too sketchy because it's a bit distracting from the subject! Overall, it's definitely an amazing work of art and I hope to see more from you!
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:iconreluin:
Thanks so much for the help! And glad you like it :>
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:iconjustch-l-c:
~JustCh-L-C Feb 29, 2012  Student Artist
Awe it's not problem at all! :)
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:iconhyamei:
oh I love the concept! this is such a beautiful sketch <3
love the details in foliages around her and the way you drew her hair! she looks so pretty and dainty ~ :heart:
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