I didn't notice the mask until after reading your description. It gets a little bit lost among the hair, because it's relatively the same value. Perhaps her hair could fall into darker shadow in that area, adding more contrast.
I agree with the below comment about adding shadow under her chin. That would help break up the shape of her head, giving it more volume (roundness).
This is incredible! I love how dark it is and yet it's so powerful! I'd like to see a little more shading in certain areas (like under the neck) but it's not too to bad! I'd also be careful about making the scenery too sketchy because it's a bit distracting from the subject! Overall, it's definitely an amazing work of art and I hope to see more from you!
oh I love the concept! this is such a beautiful sketch <3 love the details in foliages around her and the way you drew her hair! she looks so pretty and dainty ~
I agree with the below comment about adding shadow under her chin. That would help break up the shape of her head, giving it more volume (roundness).
love the details in foliages around her and the way you drew her hair! she looks so pretty and dainty ~