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cafe by Reluin cafe by Reluin
Critiques would be really loved!!
Only took 7 hours! It's nice when a picture goes quickly, but it makes me worry I'm doing something wrong.....

Pencil sketch from observation while I was in Hawaii + PS colors from imagination (and obligatory animu kid added in)
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Randamu-Chan 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
all alone, huh?
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NehanNoNiji Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cool! I got the feeling.. :D
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PonponPL Feb 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ksajhkdhhwkdhkw oh my~ It's really really gorgeous and I absolutely love it! It's perfect! The colours, the details, the perspective, aaaaahhhh everything! Amazing and inspiring work!
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:iconreluin:
ahh thank you so much! I'm glad you like it! <3
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:iconultimatede:
love it, great work! seems very sad
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:iconakimiya:
I really love your use of colour!
The only thing I would suggest would be to sharply define the things that you want the viewer to focus on more? I like the sketchy quality but I think it would be nice if you could emphasis points of interest using that method?
Keep up the great work. 8D
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:iconreluin:
Oh good idea, I'll try that. thanks for the help!
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xxwingxx Jan 22, 2013  Student General Artist
this is really nice! just a suggestion as you said critiques would be good.. i thought that maybe you could put more detail near the girl, and blur it away the further away you get from the girl, if that makes sense?

also maybe make the shadowed area towards the front more shadowy.. not darker, but less colour? - more dull? if this makes sense...

love the piece though! your work is really inspiring :)
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